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6/29/2018 c3 v-n-ll-y
Hey Alias, it's been a long time! I'm so glad to hear from you. (I'm not on FP much anymore but apparently I'm still subscribed to alerts by email. XD)
I remember reading Kid years back when I was still active on FP so it's really nice to see you haven't just abandoned the story. This brings back a lot of memories, vague as some of them are :)
I always enjoyed your writing style but it definitely comes across as a lot more polished now. I think you've always been consistent in keeping characters' voices distinct from each other, and I enjoy reading from Alfie's and Volt's (ex-Kid?)'s distinct POVs.
I've kind of dropped the ball years ago when it comes to being constructive in reviews (I'm not actively writing prose anymore either), but I'm definitely looking forward to where you take this!
Hey Alias, it's been a long time! I'm so glad to hear from you. (I'm not on FP much anymore but apparently I'm still subscribed to alerts by email. XD)
I remember reading Kid years back when I was still active on FP so it's really nice to see you haven't just abandoned the story. This brings back a lot of memories, vague as some of them are :)
I always enjoyed your writing style but it definitely comes across as a lot more polished now. I think you've always been consistent in keeping characters' voices distinct from each other, and I enjoy reading from Alfie's and Volt's (ex-Kid?)'s distinct POVs.
I've kind of dropped the ball years ago when it comes to being constructive in reviews (I'm not actively writing prose anymore either), but I'm definitely looking forward to where you take this!