for Once Upon a Summer Day7/5/2022 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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1/12/2022 c9 Dinaharun
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3/31/2019 c9 SaltwaterJanuary
Again, another very sweet chapter! Their feeoings for each other come off in a very cute, sincere way.
Again, another very sweet chapter! Their feeoings for each other come off in a very cute, sincere way.
3/31/2019 c8 SaltwaterJanuary
This was such a cute chapter- andI'm relieved that things look well for them. I think in part of the italics-thoughts you put third person, just to note. But other than that, it was a smooth chapter.
This was such a cute chapter- andI'm relieved that things look well for them. I think in part of the italics-thoughts you put third person, just to note. But other than that, it was a smooth chapter.
2/3/2019 c7 SaltwaterJanuary
I like the way Luke is so concerned with good impressions, while Mace is still playing hard to get. It's a good contrast, in a way.
I like the way Luke is so concerned with good impressions, while Mace is still playing hard to get. It's a good contrast, in a way.
1/13/2019 c6 SaltwaterJanuary
This chapter was pretty funny (though I'm not quite certain about Cass' theory, lol). I liked the dialogue between the sisters.
This chapter was pretty funny (though I'm not quite certain about Cass' theory, lol). I liked the dialogue between the sisters.
1/13/2019 c4 SaltwaterJanuary
Nice chapter! It's realistic of his mom to have been waiting and have figured out what was going on. Mothers tend to.
Nice chapter! It's realistic of his mom to have been waiting and have figured out what was going on. Mothers tend to.
6/10/2018 c3 SaltwaterJanuary
Sorry for the cut-off review last chapter. I accidentally hit send too early.
I think this guy is kinda obsessed suddenly, it's pretty cute, but you can also tell it may get annoying. But he means well.
Nice chapter.
Sorry for the cut-off review last chapter. I accidentally hit send too early.
I think this guy is kinda obsessed suddenly, it's pretty cute, but you can also tell it may get annoying. But he means well.
Nice chapter.
6/10/2018 c2 SaltwaterJanuary
I like this chapter too, and the way things are playing out with him and her. I would also say that
I like this chapter too, and the way things are playing out with him and her. I would also say that
6/5/2018 c3 
6mrsimera
Cheesy chapter lol, yeah a perfect gentleman.
If I didn't knew he is a nice man then he will looks liked a stalker to
I hope the girl is safe when she got home.
6mrsimeraCheesy chapter lol, yeah a perfect gentleman.
If I didn't knew he is a nice man then he will looks liked a stalker to
I hope the girl is safe when she got home.
6/2/2018 c2 mrsimera
Love the guy really falling hard in love on the girl though he is oblivious to his own feelings,
He is liked a lovesick .my grammar is not
Love the guy really falling hard in love on the girl though he is oblivious to his own feelings,
He is liked a lovesick .my grammar is not
5/29/2018 c1 mrsimera
Omg so sweet and romantic, It seems at first for the guy the girl is not her ideal type but just like in a song "Love moves in a mysterious ways".Love it.
Omg so sweet and romantic, It seems at first for the guy the girl is not her ideal type but just like in a song "Love moves in a mysterious ways".Love it.
5/27/2018 c1 Strawberry
Wonderful Story. Looking forward for the next chapters!
Wonderful Story. Looking forward for the next chapters!
5/27/2018 c1 SaltwaterJanuary
I like the way you wrote this. It's not over-the-top "perfect" romance that is unrealistic, but it is still sweet and cute at the same time.
I like the way you wrote this. It's not over-the-top "perfect" romance that is unrealistic, but it is still sweet and cute at the same time.