
6/9/2019 c1 Guest
I am so hooked - please update!
I am so hooked - please update!
5/4/2019 c4 Ashlie
Please say this beautiful story isn’t abandoned! Please update, I seriously can’t waittt
Please say this beautiful story isn’t abandoned! Please update, I seriously can’t waittt
5/1/2019 c4 Guest
OMG, gurl! Please update this! I loooove the plot so much! It's been too long. I NEED more of this!
I hope you're okay though.
OMG, gurl! Please update this! I loooove the plot so much! It's been too long. I NEED more of this!
I hope you're okay though.
4/4/2019 c4
6future writer girl
I've just finished reading your first story, and now this one. I'm in love and I need more of it. I really love how this story is developing.

I've just finished reading your first story, and now this one. I'm in love and I need more of it. I really love how this story is developing.
3/17/2019 c4 Guest
Please continue this story. It is so good! I have so many questions after that cliffhanger. Why did he change after his collar was removed? What's 'shadowside'? Will the Scottish jaguar reappear soon?
Please continue this story. It is so good! I have so many questions after that cliffhanger. Why did he change after his collar was removed? What's 'shadowside'? Will the Scottish jaguar reappear soon?
2/14/2019 c4 Maria
Update, please! It's been too long since you last updated!
Update, please! It's been too long since you last updated!
2/10/2019 c4 Mia
Please please please say you’ll still be updating this beautiful piece of writing! I’m so hooked onto your stories; problem is that I’m perhaps too impatient and you really left us on a cliffy!
Update soon!
Please please please say you’ll still be updating this beautiful piece of writing! I’m so hooked onto your stories; problem is that I’m perhaps too impatient and you really left us on a cliffy!
Update soon!
12/28/2018 c4 Sarah
R u deddd
R u deddd
12/18/2018 c1 Guest
My god. You're writing is seriously phenomenal. I just read Rabbit Heart and now this, and I am seriously so impressed and awed by your creativity and caliber of writing. Seriously, you immersed us so much in this world you've created and seemlessly tied it all together. I really hope you continue wth this story because it is so interesting and unlike anything I've ever read, and in the best way. Even if you don't though I really hope you know how good of a writer you are and you should really consider trying to actually get published!
My god. You're writing is seriously phenomenal. I just read Rabbit Heart and now this, and I am seriously so impressed and awed by your creativity and caliber of writing. Seriously, you immersed us so much in this world you've created and seemlessly tied it all together. I really hope you continue wth this story because it is so interesting and unlike anything I've ever read, and in the best way. Even if you don't though I really hope you know how good of a writer you are and you should really consider trying to actually get published!
11/26/2018 c4 Buzzbunny
Omygosh! This is sooooo good! Please update sooner and don't break my heart! I just got back to reading Rabbit Heart from years ago then I went to your works and saw this, i figured, "why not give it a go?" And I absolutely loved it! I loved Rabbit Heart, shouldn't have been so surprised that i loved this too. Anyways, please update soon!
Omygosh! This is sooooo good! Please update sooner and don't break my heart! I just got back to reading Rabbit Heart from years ago then I went to your works and saw this, i figured, "why not give it a go?" And I absolutely loved it! I loved Rabbit Heart, shouldn't have been so surprised that i loved this too. Anyways, please update soon!
11/19/2018 c4 Guest
I hope you update soon! Happy Thanksgiving if you're in America!
I hope you update soon! Happy Thanksgiving if you're in America!
10/27/2018 c4 Sarah
When will u updateee
When will u updateee
10/27/2018 c2 Guest
Pleaaaase update Its been MONTHS what r u doing
Pleaaaase update Its been MONTHS what r u doing