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7/14/2018 c1 43zanybellecloudo
I thought this story was good. The way Astrid is a little creepy actually made it more interesting and adds in subtle hints that this relationship isn't the usual kind. Benjamin's background also gives him something more real, adopting his brother Eric after being in care himself just endears him to the reader. Your flow is quick although I don't mind that. Overall, a nice start. Thanks for sharing, ZB.

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