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for when jacob met rachel

7/29/2019 c1 19Ckh
Cute, I guess. Why bother with flash fiction when poetry can do the same job? I like that you compared jacob's (or is it rachel's?) lingering feelings of love to the inverse of a meteor shower.

Meteor showers are nice to look at but they don't last. Love might not be a nice process but it lasts once you find 'the one'. I had to google orionids to find out what they were btw.

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