for Mates10/2/2019 c4 
3nemoskull
this is just wow. like not a good wow, a bad wow. like cringy AF YA fiction, im just waiting for the love trinangle and for the other guy to die as a deus ex machina.
3nemoskullthis is just wow. like not a good wow, a bad wow. like cringy AF YA fiction, im just waiting for the love trinangle and for the other guy to die as a deus ex machina.
9/30/2019 c20 Unknown
I read the original, there are a few things that happened in the original that didnt happen in the rewrite.
Even though I loved both stories and often reread it I do miss a few things that happened in the original.
I loved the fact that Rois took the opportunity to learn about Waverly and her world. The fact that he took the time to learn what its like to date im her world showed his true devotion to her.
I was a little disappointed to not read that in this rewrite. However, i still love reading this story and often read it over.
I read the original, there are a few things that happened in the original that didnt happen in the rewrite.
Even though I loved both stories and often reread it I do miss a few things that happened in the original.
I loved the fact that Rois took the opportunity to learn about Waverly and her world. The fact that he took the time to learn what its like to date im her world showed his true devotion to her.
I was a little disappointed to not read that in this rewrite. However, i still love reading this story and often read it over.
5/5/2019 c20 Guest
Just wow! This was an amazing story. You created characters that were well developed and grew through out the story. Their struggles felt real and right. I think that the gradual love that developed between Waverly and Rois was not forced and had the reader rooting for them from the beginning. Although the reader knows their souls are tied, you are still able to sympathize with Waverly's struggle, yet understand when she starts falling for her man. You were able to create a world that the reader could easily envision, but you did not get bogged down by too many extra details that made it hard to focus on one thing. Your story was clever, detailed, showed character development, and had a plot that propelled the characters closer together, giving it actual meaning. Bravo. I really really enjoyed this read.
Just wow! This was an amazing story. You created characters that were well developed and grew through out the story. Their struggles felt real and right. I think that the gradual love that developed between Waverly and Rois was not forced and had the reader rooting for them from the beginning. Although the reader knows their souls are tied, you are still able to sympathize with Waverly's struggle, yet understand when she starts falling for her man. You were able to create a world that the reader could easily envision, but you did not get bogged down by too many extra details that made it hard to focus on one thing. Your story was clever, detailed, showed character development, and had a plot that propelled the characters closer together, giving it actual meaning. Bravo. I really really enjoyed this read.
2/24/2019 c20 Imwaiting4myAliceandEdward
I love this story completely! You did a wonderful job with the time lines, character portrayals and culture of the worlds. Great job.
I love this story completely! You did a wonderful job with the time lines, character portrayals and culture of the worlds. Great job.
2/9/2019 c20 Skye Blue Meadows
I just got done reading this story and wanted to tell you I thought it was really good. Thank you for sharing your story with us. The detail and characters, everything about it was well thought out and painted a story in your mind as you read.
I just got done reading this story and wanted to tell you I thought it was really good. Thank you for sharing your story with us. The detail and characters, everything about it was well thought out and painted a story in your mind as you read.
2/6/2019 c20 Hyphen
I absolutely adored this story. It is a tried and true romance concept that you took a different way and I was with you the whole time.
Your scenery descriptions were beautiful. I could see a desert land of water and a sea town of trees in my mind easily. I loved your characters. My favorite thing is that Waverly never stopped calling the goddess “blue lady” it fit her character perfectly and I appreciated it.
Thank you for posting this story for us to read!
I absolutely adored this story. It is a tried and true romance concept that you took a different way and I was with you the whole time.
Your scenery descriptions were beautiful. I could see a desert land of water and a sea town of trees in my mind easily. I loved your characters. My favorite thing is that Waverly never stopped calling the goddess “blue lady” it fit her character perfectly and I appreciated it.
Thank you for posting this story for us to read!
2/2/2019 c20 Angelina
Hi hi!—
I just need to let you know how much I enjoyed this story! It is unique and well written (or, typed, actually). I hope you continue to create stories, you have talent.
Hi hi!—
I just need to let you know how much I enjoyed this story! It is unique and well written (or, typed, actually). I hope you continue to create stories, you have talent.
1/24/2019 c20 Beautiful
Didnt even know it got completed im so glad i was able to see it it was such a great story ans i cant believe it really was kero so sad but amazing
Didnt even know it got completed im so glad i was able to see it it was such a great story ans i cant believe it really was kero so sad but amazing
1/19/2019 c20 Amelie
Too bad she can't go home. Can u give update paladin story
Too bad she can't go home. Can u give update paladin story
1/19/2019 c10 Guest
This mate business is shit. And I am tired of men running behind girls. It is like authors have never grown out of thier fairytale phase.
She has no good life on earth. I understand dreams and all. But sometime i wonder if not trying to find way to adjust is best way. And i see that a lot in english romances. Stupid girls who are stubborn and devoted guys who wait for them.
This mate business is shit. And I am tired of men running behind girls. It is like authors have never grown out of thier fairytale phase.
She has no good life on earth. I understand dreams and all. But sometime i wonder if not trying to find way to adjust is best way. And i see that a lot in english romances. Stupid girls who are stubborn and devoted guys who wait for them.
1/5/2019 c18 Amelie
Ok so it's kero and Sara and pinar simply like each other lol
Ok so it's kero and Sara and pinar simply like each other lol