for Asura Shots6/19/2019 c1 
1xxPockyStraw21xx
OML as soon as I read “De Wynter” my mind was like “wait haven’t I heard tht before.”
And then I was like “wasn’t tht part of Henry’s full name?”
so you know, paused for a moment and I went back to the main story, tried to hunt down the chapter (my evidence mwhahahaha)
it...took some time :((( cries But it finally got it on chapter 116
and OML I WAS RIGHT AHHHHH xD
OK I CALL THE SHOTs (shots shots)
Not even just de wynter but sebastions whole frkin name LMAOOO, so I see u author. I see Henry’s dad. I see how u purposely said he had “stunning golden looks.” I see how Henry’s gonna grow up to look now. ;)
ugh I LOVE this serious, love the small clues and playing detective hehe.
Uh unless I was wrong about everything I just said...:(
Because wasn’t Long’s dad Chinese? It said he was the epitome of (?) british society? Hmmmm ahhhh i guess my Detective powers aren’t as strong as I thought...sad/
I’m also guessing maybe that’s his mom too, because of he eyes flashing silver/gold. And Henry’s eyes are...silver:O AWW YEAHHHHSINDJWNDJSD
1xxPockyStraw21xxOML as soon as I read “De Wynter” my mind was like “wait haven’t I heard tht before.”
And then I was like “wasn’t tht part of Henry’s full name?”
so you know, paused for a moment and I went back to the main story, tried to hunt down the chapter (my evidence mwhahahaha)
it...took some time :((( cries But it finally got it on chapter 116
and OML I WAS RIGHT AHHHHH xD
OK I CALL THE SHOTs (shots shots)
Not even just de wynter but sebastions whole frkin name LMAOOO, so I see u author. I see Henry’s dad. I see how u purposely said he had “stunning golden looks.” I see how Henry’s gonna grow up to look now. ;)
ugh I LOVE this serious, love the small clues and playing detective hehe.
Uh unless I was wrong about everything I just said...:(
Because wasn’t Long’s dad Chinese? It said he was the epitome of (?) british society? Hmmmm ahhhh i guess my Detective powers aren’t as strong as I thought...sad/
I’m also guessing maybe that’s his mom too, because of he eyes flashing silver/gold. And Henry’s eyes are...silver:O AWW YEAHHHHSINDJWNDJSD
1/19/2019 c5 Zeroalphamus
Play, that was unexpected.
It was planned from the start...to find their missing brother?
A brother called Henry? Hmm...
According to Sebastian, these two were simple troublemakers. But after this chapter it's hard to believe so. The creepy aliveish relic aside, how is going to Tibet going to protect them from Sihani?
Since you said this is connected to GSW I guess I'll have to watch out for clues -_-
Let me how over to gsw now.
Play, that was unexpected.
It was planned from the start...to find their missing brother?
A brother called Henry? Hmm...
According to Sebastian, these two were simple troublemakers. But after this chapter it's hard to believe so. The creepy aliveish relic aside, how is going to Tibet going to protect them from Sihani?
Since you said this is connected to GSW I guess I'll have to watch out for clues -_-
Let me how over to gsw now.
1/19/2019 c4 Zeroalphamus
Here I was expecting something between Sebastian and Sihani... And we got the runaways siblings instead! Jk I saw the blurb.
So who in the creepy mysterious watcher? And what/why did they steal?
Idk but I hope they don't get tortured.
Here I was expecting something between Sebastian and Sihani... And we got the runaways siblings instead! Jk I saw the blurb.
So who in the creepy mysterious watcher? And what/why did they steal?
Idk but I hope they don't get tortured.
12/25/2018 c5 57Nerissa-McC
I wonder what really happened to Henry. It doesn't sound like he was the sort of person who'd just abandon his family one day, so something definitely must have happened to him! Does it have something to do with the apparently-alive relic? And yikes, what have the twins unleashed? 0_0
57Nerissa-McCI wonder what really happened to Henry. It doesn't sound like he was the sort of person who'd just abandon his family one day, so something definitely must have happened to him! Does it have something to do with the apparently-alive relic? And yikes, what have the twins unleashed? 0_0
12/25/2018 c4 Nerissa-McC
Yikes, the Watcher is creepy! And I'm really worried about what the Prathama intends to do to the twins if she catches them...
Yikes, the Watcher is creepy! And I'm really worried about what the Prathama intends to do to the twins if she catches them...
10/3/2018 c3 Nyaanyaa
Oh my. This was not expected. And I may be wrong, but it sounded like Amir was tortured or something? Please no.
And if Kain is here then SHE must be about to appear too yay! Thanks for your clue earlier :D
Oh my. This was not expected. And I may be wrong, but it sounded like Amir was tortured or something? Please no.
And if Kain is here then SHE must be about to appear too yay! Thanks for your clue earlier :D
9/26/2018 c3 Zeroalphamus
Finally! I was waiting for something about the history of the group. And Amir IS the most mysterious after all.
Now it's starting to make sense; I guess these were the interconnections you were talking about - especially if the other school was mentioned.
Well, this dude Hasim is a douche. Yusuf seems nice enough, but why was Amir called a 'mongrel'? And why is his place in the clan so uncertain?
The adults are weird as hell...i don't think the clan is one of the 'good ones'.
Kain seems like an interesting character for sure. Can't say the academy customs are making much sense to me at the moment...also -
Was the kid Kian was talking about Kian? o.O
Finally! I was waiting for something about the history of the group. And Amir IS the most mysterious after all.
Now it's starting to make sense; I guess these were the interconnections you were talking about - especially if the other school was mentioned.
Well, this dude Hasim is a douche. Yusuf seems nice enough, but why was Amir called a 'mongrel'? And why is his place in the clan so uncertain?
The adults are weird as hell...i don't think the clan is one of the 'good ones'.
Kain seems like an interesting character for sure. Can't say the academy customs are making much sense to me at the moment...also -
Was the kid Kian was talking about Kian? o.O
9/16/2018 c3 Nerissa-McC
Aww, poor Amir :'( His family's awful! Well, all except Yusuf. Hope he appears again, I'd love to see more of him!
Aww, poor Amir :'( His family's awful! Well, all except Yusuf. Hope he appears again, I'd love to see more of him!
9/14/2018 c1 nyaanyaa
This was so strange! So, if Asurasha and Kurashaan are other schools does that mean Kian is no longer at st warriors? That can't be, right?
Where are the others? And how does Alex and this team fit in? I'm already worried for the future...
This was so strange! So, if Asurasha and Kurashaan are other schools does that mean Kian is no longer at st warriors? That can't be, right?
Where are the others? And how does Alex and this team fit in? I'm already worried for the future...
9/12/2018 c1 1Datathee
Waittttttttttttttttttt a minute. Kian's in this? Why isn't he at 's? What happened? Where are the others?
Why are these kids doing missions?
So far, I'm liking Alex. I love me so rash, brash and smash type of female characters.
The group are at each other's throat, which I expect from teenagers. This story has a different feel to it. I can't wait to read more.
1DatatheeWaittttttttttttttttttt a minute. Kian's in this? Why isn't he at 's? What happened? Where are the others?
Why are these kids doing missions?
So far, I'm liking Alex. I love me so rash, brash and smash type of female characters.
The group are at each other's throat, which I expect from teenagers. This story has a different feel to it. I can't wait to read more.
9/12/2018 c2 Zeroalphamus
Well a leap back into time to 1855? Did not see that coming.
Sebastian's missing siblings seem rather suspicious. I mean - the Rose pranks aside, if anyone got disciplinary letters from St Warriors, they definitely cannot be normal. And whoever this Cyrus dude is...that was vicious man XD
Loved the talk between Sebastian and Sihani - I think romance is blooming between the two? o.O (but she's quite young right? idk)
About the clues, no idea except that the Long Clan was mentioned and obviously the missing relic that was stolen.
Nice chapter; the style was different, but it was great!
I may be wrong but...Mhara? Isn't there a character in the main series with that name?
Well a leap back into time to 1855? Did not see that coming.
Sebastian's missing siblings seem rather suspicious. I mean - the Rose pranks aside, if anyone got disciplinary letters from St Warriors, they definitely cannot be normal. And whoever this Cyrus dude is...that was vicious man XD
Loved the talk between Sebastian and Sihani - I think romance is blooming between the two? o.O (but she's quite young right? idk)
About the clues, no idea except that the Long Clan was mentioned and obviously the missing relic that was stolen.
Nice chapter; the style was different, but it was great!
I may be wrong but...Mhara? Isn't there a character in the main series with that name?
9/10/2018 c2 57Nerissa-McC
Love the worldbuilding in this chapter! And I love Sebastian and Sihani's interactions :D Really hoping they'll show up in the main story at some point! Ooh, now I'm wondering what the clues in this chapter are xD Something tells me the theft of the relic is one of them...
57Nerissa-McCLove the worldbuilding in this chapter! And I love Sebastian and Sihani's interactions :D Really hoping they'll show up in the main story at some point! Ooh, now I'm wondering what the clues in this chapter are xD Something tells me the theft of the relic is one of them...
9/7/2018 c1 Zeroalphamus
THE HELL. IS. THIS.
Kian Kuran ...of Kurasha'an high?!
Lirian, what the hell happened? Is this really the future?
I'm hoping for an explanation about all of this. All of it. From whatever this mission/team thing is, to where the hell Henry, Ria and Amir and Asta are. I read this carefully...so if Kian is fifteen and he has been with these guys for a year [if not more...]... o.O
What the hell happened? [He USED to be a student there?] /
[The darkblood academy?!]
The future looks freaky as hell. I had no idea there were so many other schools either.
And Alex. She sure seems interesting, too. I can sense a huge backstory there - the prophecy and the curse and all.
But seriously, WHAT happened?!
THE HELL. IS. THIS.
Kian Kuran ...of Kurasha'an high?!
Lirian, what the hell happened? Is this really the future?
I'm hoping for an explanation about all of this. All of it. From whatever this mission/team thing is, to where the hell Henry, Ria and Amir and Asta are. I read this carefully...so if Kian is fifteen and he has been with these guys for a year [if not more...]... o.O
What the hell happened? [He USED to be a student there?] /
[The darkblood academy?!]
The future looks freaky as hell. I had no idea there were so many other schools either.
And Alex. She sure seems interesting, too. I can sense a huge backstory there - the prophecy and the curse and all.
But seriously, WHAT happened?!
9/7/2018 c1 Nerissa-McC
Yikes, the curse is terrifying, and I'm really glad they managed to escape it! I like Alex already :D Really hoping she and her friends will appear at some point in the main story! And wow, they're working for KIAN? 0_0 What's he up to?
Yikes, the curse is terrifying, and I'm really glad they managed to escape it! I like Alex already :D Really hoping she and her friends will appear at some point in the main story! And wow, they're working for KIAN? 0_0 What's he up to?