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10/15/2018 c3 8total.boron
Congrats on getting back into the writing groove with this character! I like him...very mysterious, with an undoubtedly juicy back story, but still probably a good guy at heart. I like Mira's character, too...I wonder how far her knowledge of Brandon goes. It may sound odd, but my absolute favourite part in this chapter is how you described Mira's boots as "no-nonsense". Don't know why I love it so much...guess it just conjures up a very specific image of a pair of boots, and it says something about her personality as well. Nice collection of chapters so far, keep up the good work!

Good luck with the writing competition!

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