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2/23/2006 c1 9Tycko Hurley
i loved it it was really good so real so me.
3/25/2002 c1 5suicidal angels touch
This is a really good poem. I totally understand what your saying. I feel the same way all the time!Wanting to be with someone but to afraid of what will happen in the future, so focused on others feeling or being hurt to see what's going on in the present, then ending up getting left behind all together :( Well that's just how i feel WONDERFUL WRITE! I love it
3/11/2002 c1 19Andromeda
wow, I can really relate to that. I love your imagery and I love the stanza:

I want to be touched,

Caressed like a flower.

But fear I will wilt,

Die and turn black.

That's exactly how I feel right now. Great job!
9/17/2000 c1 Azrael
a great poem... I also have the same problem
7/25/2000 c1 dafnap
great, like all your other poems, i also run into this problem...once again, can't wait to read more!

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