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11/15/2018 c1 26Zukafu Chiriamoto
I very much enjoyed this tale. I would love to know more about the world that this cast live in! Even if the more brief sections explaining Ketris' travels and sights, I was still hooked (I would apologise but, honestly, I thought that was a great accidental pun) right on through.

And the bit at the end with the cannon was very amusing. It ended the whole narrative on such a light note. Very nice piece!
~ Zukafu
10/8/2018 c1 25Jaya Avendel
I love this story. Even with the swift passage of time, the places Ketris visited and how he visited them was very engaging. And the ending splash Ketris took into the Princess's pool ends the story with such laughter.

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