11/23/2018 c1 26Zukafu Chiriamoto
I was going to go to bed but I decided "Nah, that's read this and then go." I am not regretting that choice at all.

There is a lot that I'm currently questioning - but it's all good I want to carrying reading and find out sorts of questions. The voice you set from pretty much the first line is both consistent but also clearly sets out the tone of this piece and your main character.

I had a few laughs and a few shocked face moments. I very much enjoyed this first chapter.
~ Zukafu