
1/26/2023 c1 knockmeoffmyfeet
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5/4/2021 c1 Joeson
There is no way to ignore those first few sentences. So, naturally, I had to keep going from there. You know what, I suggest you join NővelStar's writing competition. A lot of readers will love your work.
There is no way to ignore those first few sentences. So, naturally, I had to keep going from there. You know what, I suggest you join NővelStar's writing competition. A lot of readers will love your work.
11/10/2018 c1 LittleDeadFly
[Of a sudden] - Think you mean 'all of a sudden'.
Having your story start with the main character waking up to find out it's all a dream is terribly generic and boring of an opener. Start at a more interesting point, something that gets the plot going, at least for your characters. Ask yourself, is this opening different from hundreds of its like? What am I trying to tell with this opening, other than that it's yet another day?
[Of a sudden] - Think you mean 'all of a sudden'.
Having your story start with the main character waking up to find out it's all a dream is terribly generic and boring of an opener. Start at a more interesting point, something that gets the plot going, at least for your characters. Ask yourself, is this opening different from hundreds of its like? What am I trying to tell with this opening, other than that it's yet another day?