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4/11/2019 c2 42addledwalrus
I think this chapter moved too fast and that you could have used chapter dividers to make the passage of time more clear.

Also, you can't really have characters shout or yell without the use of exclamation marks.

I hope this advice helps.
4/11/2019 c1 addledwalrus
I'm guessing that English isn't your first language? Since you've made some mistakes when it comes to verb tenses.

Also, this so far seems more like a history of werewolves in general, rather than the story of a single one.

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