for Knit Together7/25/2019 c1 Charlieteam
Didn't know you also wrote poetry.
This was tragic and beautiful.
Didn't know you also wrote poetry.
This was tragic and beautiful.
12/2/2018 c1 Will9035
(Oh man, you have to keep posting material that I really can't assess...)
My first impression was that this poem was dedicated to someone like Kirsten, what with the sense that you tried and tried to make a personal relationship work out, it didn't, but you don't hold the other person responsible at all for the degradation of said relationship. But then at the very end you put the dedication to SoggySoul, and I don't have any idea who that could refer to. (And if you've alluded in the past to who uses that alias, I've since forgotten.) Regardless of the intention, I'd say this is most definitely the most melancholy (but not regretful) of the poems I've seen you post as of late.
(Oh man, you have to keep posting material that I really can't assess...)
My first impression was that this poem was dedicated to someone like Kirsten, what with the sense that you tried and tried to make a personal relationship work out, it didn't, but you don't hold the other person responsible at all for the degradation of said relationship. But then at the very end you put the dedication to SoggySoul, and I don't have any idea who that could refer to. (And if you've alluded in the past to who uses that alias, I've since forgotten.) Regardless of the intention, I'd say this is most definitely the most melancholy (but not regretful) of the poems I've seen you post as of late.