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12/4/2019 c7 Guest
You wrote this a year ago, so I doubt you’ll add to it, but is there more? I’d love to read more about these characters and this world, and I want to know what happens with the immortals. Great story overall!
4/11/2019 c1 6She Who Loves Pineapples II
Interesting start here! I’m wondering why invisibility is considered useless - but I suppose in a world where it was common, there would be precautions for invisible people.

I realize this is a sequel to your other works, but it might be a good idea to do some scene setting. It kind of felt like starting reading in the middle of the book.

Epithets - when she says she doesn’t understand “that Hispanic young man” it feels weird because it’s the ONLY time she uses an epithet, and it’s random and implies that she doesn’t understand him BECAUSE he’s a “Hispanic young man.”

I think
I’m missing the context for Tyler’s dilemma, but it does intrigue me. Must he give up his freedom for otgers’ Peace? Will he go willingly or run? I’m interested in finding out. :)

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