for Winter Touch8/25/2021 c1 VW
This series is spectacularly good! The stories are deep, with just the right amount of description. The author adds enough detail to give the reader a solid understanding of what is going on in the world around the character, but stops just short of giving information that they may perceived as irrelevant; and the flow is great too. I summarized it in my head as "quality details centralized around what the reader would find interesting." There wasn't any fluff in the stories either; everything contributed to the plot, and as the reader you can see that, which I think is super important. Hopefully the author continues the series, I'd be interested in seeing what happens next!
This series is spectacularly good! The stories are deep, with just the right amount of description. The author adds enough detail to give the reader a solid understanding of what is going on in the world around the character, but stops just short of giving information that they may perceived as irrelevant; and the flow is great too. I summarized it in my head as "quality details centralized around what the reader would find interesting." There wasn't any fluff in the stories either; everything contributed to the plot, and as the reader you can see that, which I think is super important. Hopefully the author continues the series, I'd be interested in seeing what happens next!
9/24/2020 c1 LPK9
This is absolutely brilliant. So well written, so evocative, so powerful, so interesting. Great job!
This is absolutely brilliant. So well written, so evocative, so powerful, so interesting. Great job!
12/6/2018 c1 
1LeaClaire
Excellent description, really vivid. I like the character development, though I would have liked to hear more about Jack and his hijinks.
The Christmas Dinner is a lovely gesture, but we need to hear more about how she misses it for it to have a greatly emotional impact.
It would be nice to have more physical descriptions of the characters, so as to create an image of them in our minds.
1LeaClaireExcellent description, really vivid. I like the character development, though I would have liked to hear more about Jack and his hijinks.
The Christmas Dinner is a lovely gesture, but we need to hear more about how she misses it for it to have a greatly emotional impact.
It would be nice to have more physical descriptions of the characters, so as to create an image of them in our minds.