for Moonlight12/15/2020 c1 
14Mislav
Very descriptive and moving haiku. You have the skills to say so much in a limited number of words. Enough to make me truly care for the character and envision the scene. I especially liked the lines "Under the pale sphere, beneath the silken darkness, I will find you soon" and "Moonlight reveals all secrets, a bloodless lover/Ripped and torn apart". Keep up the great work. I always like reading your stories and poems.
14MislavVery descriptive and moving haiku. You have the skills to say so much in a limited number of words. Enough to make me truly care for the character and envision the scene. I especially liked the lines "Under the pale sphere, beneath the silken darkness, I will find you soon" and "Moonlight reveals all secrets, a bloodless lover/Ripped and torn apart". Keep up the great work. I always like reading your stories and poems.
12/9/2018 c1 1ArkinV
Fantastically written, I almost feel as though the "pale" moon represents a reflection of the writers own self- a hollow shell of what once was. I love the line "moonlight reveals all secrets", it gives a sense that 'at the end of the day' nobody's secrets can remain hidden forever, and it's only when the sun goes down can they be revealed.
1ArkinVFantastically written, I almost feel as though the "pale" moon represents a reflection of the writers own self- a hollow shell of what once was. I love the line "moonlight reveals all secrets", it gives a sense that 'at the end of the day' nobody's secrets can remain hidden forever, and it's only when the sun goes down can they be revealed.