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12/17/2018 c1 10The DarkCat
That seemed deep. It was nice to see how the person thought about the bridge in the naive childhood and how his thoughts changed later on. How at first the things that he associated with (other humans) and how later his perception changed and he began to care for nature. And most importantly I liked how the wood suffered the unneeded pain holding up the bridge. It was as if this could relate to people being forced to do things that they are not capable of, yet still they must suffer against their will. I think this poem might be to raise awareness against the destruction of nature(those are just my thoughts.) Anyway thank you for this amazing poem, I will remember it.
12/15/2018 c1 73ChangeMyName
I really like this. Maybe I'm getting a different metaphor out of it than you intended, but I still very much enjoyed it. Thanks

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