Reviews: Chicken Yard Sinkholes (A Creepypasta)

for Chicken Yard Sinkholes (A Creepypasta)

1/7/2019 c1

95DukeZachary
Nice work very interesting and creepypasta like the weakness to vinegar was a good twist too well done.

1/7/2019 c1

20Kitsune95
This was weird. I was sort of hoping for something a bit more creepy, but it was interesting.

One thing to keep in mind though: When there's dialogue, remember to start a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes. It gets a bit hard to tell who is saying what otherwise.