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1/20/2019 c2 8total.boron
Hey, I really enjoyed these first two chapters! You have a really captivating writing style and I love the setting of Hell for this story. One thing I might suggest: in these first few chapters you've introduced a lot of characters and although it's very well-paced, it might benefit readers to give a sort of list of newly-introduced characters at the end of each chapter, with something like their name, race and their relationship to one another. Overall though this is really well-written so far and the characters and very intriguing!

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