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12/21/2019 c2 23CheddarBrat789
I'm not really into fantasy stories, but so far this is an interesting read, with none of the chapters overstaying their welcome. I feel it's too early to really comment on any of the characters, but I did find it abrupt how the prologue was in third person, but then it switched to first person for this chapter. Then again, maybe that'll be explained if I read more. Another thing I found odd is how there are several instances where some inner dialogue is happening, but it's not specified with italicization or quotation marks... but that's a minor complaint. Otherwise, nice work.

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