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4/25/2019 c2 What Image
Might want to make your chapters a little bit longer, other than that, this is off to a good start. I look forward to seeing what you plan on doing; also, what do your characters look like? It would be cool to see their hair color, eye color, and facial structure. I kind of need a vague idea as to what they look like.

Also, I kind of like the suspense filling this, keep up the good work.
2/20/2019 c1 6ElvenValar
nice start

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