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3/27/2021 c1 JaveHarron
A nice isekai story here. I enjoyed Remmi and Zoe's dialogue here. There was less description of some of the 'visuals' or scenes, something I feel could've been explored in a lot more interesting detail. Otherwise, though, the dialogue feels and flows naturally.
8/5/2020 c1 2MV Kramer
I'm so glad this story had a happy ending and both girls woke up. You did a good job worldbuilding Dreamearth, I'd be interested to read other stories that take place there, if you want to write them.
3/11/2019 c1 Cali-Fornia
Loved your story.
With the magic of your pen, the English language is transformed to poetic beauty. Gracias!
2/23/2019 c1 1BlueWinterRose
This was a sweet and powerful story about the power of sibling love! I found it very good and enjoyed it deeply, I like the names you choose for the characters as well as the way you showed how the two worlds work and how people move between them! Great work!

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