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2/11/2021 c1 Guest
who yells out the description of the person they're talking to? so bad. cringey. this needs to be reworked
7/8/2019 c1 Home-Depot-Lover
The story is intriguing, but I don't understand the characters so far. Not the best way to describe the characters through dialogue. It feels very unnatural. The potential is there. Just keep at it!
3/21/2019 c3 14J.Kuzzey
A talking stone would have startled me too haha.
This story makes me laugh quite often. Lots of humor elements
3/20/2019 c3 18Sir Scott
Interesting chapter. If her clothes dissolves in water, I hope she doesn't get caught in a rain storm.
~Sir Scott
3/20/2019 c3 Sakumira Agashi
Again, you did a great job writing this chapter. I love the adventure they are going on, and the interaction between characters is quite interesting as well!
3/16/2019 c2 Guest
Ugly and shellfish is spelled wrong so bad review on my part but some of it was ok post more than 2 chapters so yeah
3/16/2019 c1 Guest
Bad
3/13/2019 c2 14J.Kuzzey
Sending her off on the fruit vendor's cart is a whole level of hilarity I didn't expect. The never-ending dresses was pretty funny as well.
3/10/2019 c2 Freeman The Storymaker
Hmm... well, this is a interesting chapter.
3/10/2019 c2 18Sir Scott
Interesting. I'm surprised that the guards were able to manhandle a goddess. Anyway, this was a pretty entertaining chapter. You made a mistake by using the word thrown for throne.
~Sir Scott
3/3/2019 c1 Sir Scott
It's a good start. I liked how you told most of the details in the dialogue. That's how it was done on the old time radio shows.
~Sir Scott
2/27/2019 c1 Freeman The Storymaker
Hmm... Lovely story you made here. Keep up the good work.
2/27/2019 c1 14J.Kuzzey
Definitely like the concept presented here. Lots of potential. My only suggestion would be not to rely on dialogue so much to convey things, like what a character looks like. There are places where narration/description would have been better used instead.

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