for A Mother's Hidden Sorrow
123/31/2019 c1 SaltwaterJanuary
I think the story is lovely, and it goes through the feelings of a mother's loss very well. I'm sorry to hear that you had that experience.
I do think that the writing could have been a bit different though. It switches through past and present tenses a few times, and "bestfriend" isn't one word- but like I said, the story itself is very good
I think the story is lovely, and it goes through the feelings of a mother's loss very well. I'm sorry to hear that you had that experience.
I do think that the writing could have been a bit different though. It switches through past and present tenses a few times, and "bestfriend" isn't one word- but like I said, the story itself is very good