for Hearts Together on the Hard Rock Road2/1 c1 
5glide10001
Starting a chapter with your main character in a coffin surrounding by rising waters (death surrounded by chaos). And the mysterious entity that had been with her throughout her life-always there, always waiting. But she must come to him of her own free will and on his terms. And yet there was something about him that was both beautiful and evil to her. Your writing style is a prose and there is a depth to it that creates questions. It's so close to classic metaphor but then twists and turns as if fighting against an easy understanding.
Downright beguiling. Beautifully crafted.
5glide10001Starting a chapter with your main character in a coffin surrounding by rising waters (death surrounded by chaos). And the mysterious entity that had been with her throughout her life-always there, always waiting. But she must come to him of her own free will and on his terms. And yet there was something about him that was both beautiful and evil to her. Your writing style is a prose and there is a depth to it that creates questions. It's so close to classic metaphor but then twists and turns as if fighting against an easy understanding.
Downright beguiling. Beautifully crafted.
2/1/2023 c1 7lovecall
"Let it goes! The thing that is heavy!"
I bet it is the thing he or even the current Pope wants to say. But it is just purely my guess.
7lovecall"Let it goes! The thing that is heavy!"
I bet it is the thing he or even the current Pope wants to say. But it is just purely my guess.
8/6/2022 c1 95WJosephusW
I just finished the first chapter. Very intriguing and well-written. The use of themes in your imagery is awesome. I still have some questions, but I will read further before I ask them. All in all, very well done!
95WJosephusWI just finished the first chapter. Very intriguing and well-written. The use of themes in your imagery is awesome. I still have some questions, but I will read further before I ask them. All in all, very well done!