
4/21/2020 c28 Spazthemagicbeanstalk
This has a been a fantastic journey to take with you, and I am happy to support you in getting the books fully published. I hope you'll try to get a message to us when the books are available as I will happy to buy the set. I think you did a fantastic job making each of the characters fully fleshed out and consistent, and was suitably surprised by the true nature of the convergence. Keep up the great work 3
This has a been a fantastic journey to take with you, and I am happy to support you in getting the books fully published. I hope you'll try to get a message to us when the books are available as I will happy to buy the set. I think you did a fantastic job making each of the characters fully fleshed out and consistent, and was suitably surprised by the true nature of the convergence. Keep up the great work 3
2/27/2020 c24 ShadowTigris
To come back after almost a year to find an entire new story to read was brilliant - but the tears I have shed over this story so far, and the heartbreak of losing characters is almost too much. I never thought I would get so attached to characters from a book (or 3 books), but here I am crying over the death of everyone.
But despite the sadness, it's been a joy to start reading these books again (had to start from the very beginning of book 1, I'd forgotten so much). Thank you for writing these, and I can't wait for the next chapter x
To come back after almost a year to find an entire new story to read was brilliant - but the tears I have shed over this story so far, and the heartbreak of losing characters is almost too much. I never thought I would get so attached to characters from a book (or 3 books), but here I am crying over the death of everyone.
But despite the sadness, it's been a joy to start reading these books again (had to start from the very beginning of book 1, I'd forgotten so much). Thank you for writing these, and I can't wait for the next chapter x
12/2/2019 c18
6future writer girl
Fantastic chapter as always! I suspected it was going to be a boy, just because of the lineage thing. I figured that Varg would need a male heir, but I'm thrilled it's a girl. Valria is a beautiful name! I don't know what could be wrong with her though, maybe Batsuba thinks she will be too powerful? Or perhaps she more human, so she will not have the same life expectancy as her parents. I believe Lord Anshar took the news surprisingly well... But I think he would still act like a Severus Snape to Val. He loves Halea, but all he sees when he looks at Val is Varg. I'm excited to see Varg be an overprotective dad! Keep up the great work!
-FWG

Fantastic chapter as always! I suspected it was going to be a boy, just because of the lineage thing. I figured that Varg would need a male heir, but I'm thrilled it's a girl. Valria is a beautiful name! I don't know what could be wrong with her though, maybe Batsuba thinks she will be too powerful? Or perhaps she more human, so she will not have the same life expectancy as her parents. I believe Lord Anshar took the news surprisingly well... But I think he would still act like a Severus Snape to Val. He loves Halea, but all he sees when he looks at Val is Varg. I'm excited to see Varg be an overprotective dad! Keep up the great work!
-FWG
11/15/2019 c17 future writer girl
I loved this chapter! I'm so glad that the big bad finally got revealed. I have to admit, I didn't think much of the false God when it was mentioned. I honestly wasn't sure what it was. Keep up the amazing work!
I loved this chapter! I'm so glad that the big bad finally got revealed. I have to admit, I didn't think much of the false God when it was mentioned. I honestly wasn't sure what it was. Keep up the amazing work!
10/18/2019 c15 future writer girl
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I figured she was going to get pregnant, it just seems to fit the progression of the story, but I really enjoyed how you displayed the fear Halea and Varg have for raising a child, but that they still are excited and love their cub. I'm also quite excited to see how lord Anshar will react- it will probably be negative, but I'm interested if he would be the kind of person that is either A.) This baby is half someone I love, so I love this baby. This child has done nothing to me, and I will protect it. or B.) the Snape route that is bitter that the woman he loved is with another man. Keep up the great work!
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I figured she was going to get pregnant, it just seems to fit the progression of the story, but I really enjoyed how you displayed the fear Halea and Varg have for raising a child, but that they still are excited and love their cub. I'm also quite excited to see how lord Anshar will react- it will probably be negative, but I'm interested if he would be the kind of person that is either A.) This baby is half someone I love, so I love this baby. This child has done nothing to me, and I will protect it. or B.) the Snape route that is bitter that the woman he loved is with another man. Keep up the great work!
10/8/2019 c14 future writer girl
JM,
this chapter was awesome. I absolutely loved it. It was paced wonderfully and I love that Uro is really trying to fit in amongst the wolves for Halea. I can't wait for another chapter. Happy writing.
-FWG
JM,
this chapter was awesome. I absolutely loved it. It was paced wonderfully and I love that Uro is really trying to fit in amongst the wolves for Halea. I can't wait for another chapter. Happy writing.
-FWG
9/23/2019 c13 Spazthemagicbeanstalk
"young lady" haha, that was delightful! I'm really interested to see how Uro will react to seeing Lord Anshar in the mirror, and how things will likely continue to get worse before they get better! Keep up the great work, I always like seeing Convergence updates :)
"young lady" haha, that was delightful! I'm really interested to see how Uro will react to seeing Lord Anshar in the mirror, and how things will likely continue to get worse before they get better! Keep up the great work, I always like seeing Convergence updates :)
8/10/2019 c10 future writer girl
Hey!
I'm glad the new chapter is up, but dont worry about keeping your posting schedule up too much. Focus on your recovery. I hope everything goes well. I'm hopeful to see more interactions of samesa and the falcon (who's name I always forget!) And I'm surprised at myself, but I'm kinda hoping Halea gets pregnant soon? I feel like it would add a whole new layer to the story. Either way, can't wait for the next upload!
Hey!
I'm glad the new chapter is up, but dont worry about keeping your posting schedule up too much. Focus on your recovery. I hope everything goes well. I'm hopeful to see more interactions of samesa and the falcon (who's name I always forget!) And I'm surprised at myself, but I'm kinda hoping Halea gets pregnant soon? I feel like it would add a whole new layer to the story. Either way, can't wait for the next upload!
8/7/2019 c9 future writer girl
Hey! I've just finished binging your series and I am absolutely in love. I love the complexity of your characters and the world building you have done. The story is progressing nicely, and I loved this chapter. Otsana is a great character so I'm glad to see her fight for her pack, especially against fenris. I do hope you plan on making them a pair later on, after he learns how to deal with her. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Hey! I've just finished binging your series and I am absolutely in love. I love the complexity of your characters and the world building you have done. The story is progressing nicely, and I loved this chapter. Otsana is a great character so I'm glad to see her fight for her pack, especially against fenris. I do hope you plan on making them a pair later on, after he learns how to deal with her. I can't wait for the next chapter!
6/24/2019 c2 Guest
[Chapter 2] I really like the end of this chapter where Samesa manages to defeat the advanced spider monster without help from anyone else!
I can't help but compare with Halea's encounter with this scary monster type in Book 2, where she seemed utterly helpless and things weren't looking good before she was rescued. It seems like 'female leads' in fantasy/supernatural on FP tend to do everything better than, at least, other females (which is something that, I guess, makes sense, and I can enjoy) - but I like how Samesa sort of "bettered" Halea in this situation. What's even better, in my opinion, and pretty clever (not sure if any of this was deliberate or not :D), is Samesa's victory here doesn't detract from Halea's lead female "specialness" (I mean, Book 3 is even named after her :P), because Samesa didn't even seem to save her own life through skill or power, but [her personal experience? The luck of suddenly feeling such strong emotions at the right time freeing her? Perhaps her (strength of) character? I'm not entirely sure].
Even though this is fantasy fiction, I like how it's kind of like a bit of realism has been thrown in here, because, sometimes, we manage to do well (or not) with something in life and the outcome was (probably?) ultimately swayed by chance. Maybe I'm reading too much into this, haha, but.. Very cool.
Hope this comment brings you some happiness!
~ JM_
[Chapter 2] I really like the end of this chapter where Samesa manages to defeat the advanced spider monster without help from anyone else!
I can't help but compare with Halea's encounter with this scary monster type in Book 2, where she seemed utterly helpless and things weren't looking good before she was rescued. It seems like 'female leads' in fantasy/supernatural on FP tend to do everything better than, at least, other females (which is something that, I guess, makes sense, and I can enjoy) - but I like how Samesa sort of "bettered" Halea in this situation. What's even better, in my opinion, and pretty clever (not sure if any of this was deliberate or not :D), is Samesa's victory here doesn't detract from Halea's lead female "specialness" (I mean, Book 3 is even named after her :P), because Samesa didn't even seem to save her own life through skill or power, but [her personal experience? The luck of suddenly feeling such strong emotions at the right time freeing her? Perhaps her (strength of) character? I'm not entirely sure].
Even though this is fantasy fiction, I like how it's kind of like a bit of realism has been thrown in here, because, sometimes, we manage to do well (or not) with something in life and the outcome was (probably?) ultimately swayed by chance. Maybe I'm reading too much into this, haha, but.. Very cool.
Hope this comment brings you some happiness!
~ JM_
4/5/2019 c1 raxtus20
Yayyyy! You are back! God.. this chapter made me cry. I really do feel for Lord Anshar. Can't wait for more!
Yayyyy! You are back! God.. this chapter made me cry. I really do feel for Lord Anshar. Can't wait for more!