for Neverending Forest11/12/2024 c1 Susanaury
Your story has me totally captivated! Every scene you describe feels so vivid, like I'm right there with the characters. Are you thinking of continuing the story? I’d love to see what happens next!
Your story has me totally captivated! Every scene you describe feels so vivid, like I'm right there with the characters. Are you thinking of continuing the story? I’d love to see what happens next!
9/10/2022 c1 JaveHarron
Okay, a few strengths and weaknesses of your story. You able to give each character a distinct voice, so it's easier to follow who is speaking. What might make your story stronger is a bit more description of setting, since it adds a lot more physicality and makes suspension of disbelief easier. Looking forward to your other works!
Okay, a few strengths and weaknesses of your story. You able to give each character a distinct voice, so it's easier to follow who is speaking. What might make your story stronger is a bit more description of setting, since it adds a lot more physicality and makes suspension of disbelief easier. Looking forward to your other works!