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7/2/2020 c1 48Woedin
Wow! It's amazing imagery, and how very erotic is the piece. The sensuality in your poem very much transfixes the reader, or it did me. ~Nicely done~
2/14/2020 c1 64atalantea
Oooh. Sensual piece. I have read a few here and I always look for a twist or something that makes it unique. Some pieces just reads like a page off of a romance novel. This made me feels lke I walked in on something. So I guess there was a good build of heat there.
Keep writing!
Love,
Ata

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