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8/12/2019 c1 10The DarkCat
I liked the repetetition, between the lines in the second and the sixth column, the emotion set here was really in the second column it seems that the metaphorical "I" has doubts and perhaps views the fight as absurd, "What is even left?/ To take our last breaths?" and in the end this person is a lot more sure and has faith, hope to win, I loved this change it was really cool. I also loved the final column:" Our victory bathed in morning light / Forever an echo in the night." It just seems kind of like that battle is in the past and the remainder of that event is still alive and haunting... Anyway, a cool poem!

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