for My Boy Next Door1/10/2022 c2 anna Marry
halo author, my name is Anna, an editor for a fast growing platform, i am so interested in your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
halo author, my name is Anna, an editor for a fast growing platform, i am so interested in your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?
8/26/2021 c2 yaraaaa
Hope you come back to this story. I found it so interesting and wonder how you will take things.
Hope you come back to this story. I found it so interesting and wonder how you will take things.
8/9/2020 c1 yaraaaa
Hello, I find this story intriguing and I hope you come back to it because I see a lot of potiential.
Hello, I find this story intriguing and I hope you come back to it because I see a lot of potiential.
10/15/2019 c2 
2not functional account
hello! This story really touched me because I've been thinking about situations such as these a lot recently, and how much potential they have to bring together, or break apart people.
That being said, here are some suggestions:
You might want to run every chapter through spell check: I noticed a different misspellings of "Christian" in both chapters: "Chrstian", "Christen", etc.
"High school" is two words, not one.
The "Lucy" actress's name is spelled "Lucille".
I enjoy reading your characterization of Christian over the course of the two chapters, but idk if Lucy, who really likes him, would ever refer to him as "filthy"... maybe use "grubby" instead? It sounds cuter and less harsh.
I'm glad you're talking about the emotional implications of getting in an accident... mood swings do occur.
I now really want to know what went down during her 21st birthday and his escape to London...
anyway, keep writing!
2not functional accounthello! This story really touched me because I've been thinking about situations such as these a lot recently, and how much potential they have to bring together, or break apart people.
That being said, here are some suggestions:
You might want to run every chapter through spell check: I noticed a different misspellings of "Christian" in both chapters: "Chrstian", "Christen", etc.
"High school" is two words, not one.
The "Lucy" actress's name is spelled "Lucille".
I enjoy reading your characterization of Christian over the course of the two chapters, but idk if Lucy, who really likes him, would ever refer to him as "filthy"... maybe use "grubby" instead? It sounds cuter and less harsh.
I'm glad you're talking about the emotional implications of getting in an accident... mood swings do occur.
I now really want to know what went down during her 21st birthday and his escape to London...
anyway, keep writing!