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4/19/2021 c1 HeyCharles
Author’s way of storytelling is so good, I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
12/15/2019 c1 3Felix Retif
I feel like dark fantasy rather than horror is a better categorisation of this piece.

I liked it, but despite the dark ending, it never really approached horror for me. Which isn't to say it's poorly written or that it doesn't work. It absolutely does - I just feel like fantasy is a more natural home for it than horror.

The description is evocative, and the drip feeding of info to the reader works. At times I think it might have benefited from a little editing, but by and large, pretty solid.

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