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1/13 c1 Grace
What the hell, this is absolutely incredible. Every word in this holds so much strength!
12/27/2019 c1 bonk
The "Frightened" part was confusing. Was the animal or the hunter frightened? Was the "you turn" connected to the word "frightened"? What was there to be frightened of? A realization of doing something wrong which resulted in the cradling of the doe later?

And how can the character help "save thousands"? (Or was the "you" directed to the reader?) I know this is probably supposed to be thought-provoking, which is why it ended the way it did, but still...

(sorry for all the questions...)

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