for The Vignette Chronicles: Book 14/19/2021 c1 Joeson
Great start! I'd like to see how this is going to turn out. You know what, you can join NovelStar's writing competition.
Great start! I'd like to see how this is going to turn out. You know what, you can join NovelStar's writing competition.
4/19/2021 c9 
18Sir Scott
That was a pretty exciting chapter. Vignette is a hell of a fighter.
~Sir Scott
18Sir ScottThat was a pretty exciting chapter. Vignette is a hell of a fighter.
~Sir Scott
4/12/2021 c2 94Cynthia Brent
"It snuck out of the facility and made it eight miles to the signs." This is really chilling! I love how at this point you have no idea that "it" will be a girl he falls in love with!
94Cynthia Brent"It snuck out of the facility and made it eight miles to the signs." This is really chilling! I love how at this point you have no idea that "it" will be a girl he falls in love with!
10/6/2020 c8 18Sir Scott
It is a risk if he tells her that true. And it always changes the relationship.
~Sir Scott
18Sir ScottIt is a risk if he tells her that true. And it always changes the relationship.
~Sir Scott
2/15/2020 c1 LDF
First off, I'd like to wish you congrats on your first foray into sci-fi!
Secondly, I hope my review helps you with your writing.
The tone is a bit...off...for someone revealing this huge government secret. Watch a few clips on YT on real life whistleblowers to get a feel of how it's done. They don't start by saying how oh, I was like you, I thought this was a thing for nerds, they go right into the misconception, their role in it, and what they've found. They don't have this narrative like they're telling you a story.
First off, I'd like to wish you congrats on your first foray into sci-fi!
Secondly, I hope my review helps you with your writing.
The tone is a bit...off...for someone revealing this huge government secret. Watch a few clips on YT on real life whistleblowers to get a feel of how it's done. They don't start by saying how oh, I was like you, I thought this was a thing for nerds, they go right into the misconception, their role in it, and what they've found. They don't have this narrative like they're telling you a story.
1/12/2020 c2 LostSoul009
There should be more information, but I am intrigued by this girl, or is she some kind of AI?
There should be more information, but I am intrigued by this girl, or is she some kind of AI?
1/10/2020 c1 DuramaSama
I think this is a great setup you've got going. In my opinion, it does seem a bit vague, as far as the amount of information that's given, but a very entertaining prologue nevertheless! Can't wait for more
I think this is a great setup you've got going. In my opinion, it does seem a bit vague, as far as the amount of information that's given, but a very entertaining prologue nevertheless! Can't wait for more