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4/19/2021 c1 Joeson
Great start! I'd like to see how this is going to turn out. You know what, you can join NovelStar's writing competition.
4/19/2021 c9 18Sir Scott
That was a pretty exciting chapter. Vignette is a hell of a fighter.
~Sir Scott
4/12/2021 c2 94Cynthia Brent
"It snuck out of the facility and made it eight miles to the signs." This is really chilling! I love how at this point you have no idea that "it" will be a girl he falls in love with!
12/2/2020 c1 Cynthia Brent
Agent Schrader? Like Breaking Bad? Awesome!
10/6/2020 c8 18Sir Scott
It is a risk if he tells her that true. And it always changes the relationship.
~Sir Scott
2/15/2020 c5 1LostSoul009
Hmm interesting. How are they going to protect her.
2/15/2020 c1 LDF
First off, I'd like to wish you congrats on your first foray into sci-fi!

Secondly, I hope my review helps you with your writing.

The tone is a bit...off...for someone revealing this huge government secret. Watch a few clips on YT on real life whistleblowers to get a feel of how it's done. They don't start by saying how oh, I was like you, I thought this was a thing for nerds, they go right into the misconception, their role in it, and what they've found. They don't have this narrative like they're telling you a story.
1/18/2020 c4 LostSoul009
He knows...
1/17/2020 c3 LostSoul009
He is not the only one who is intrigued.
1/12/2020 c2 LostSoul009
There should be more information, but I am intrigued by this girl, or is she some kind of AI?
1/10/2020 c1 DuramaSama
I think this is a great setup you've got going. In my opinion, it does seem a bit vague, as far as the amount of information that's given, but a very entertaining prologue nevertheless! Can't wait for more

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