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4/1 c1 38Woedin
It is in just such a reality that I often lose myself, and in return have been introduced to some of my deepest thoughts. I commend the beautiful imagery of your poem, I do love this one friend.
3/8 c1 286Archia
The water can encompass everything. I really enjoyed your poem and the image it created.
2/18 c1 45CitrusChickadee
This creates a nice, relaxing image. :)
2/14 c1 64atalantea
I like your consistent use of the ocean theme and how all your metaphors and personifications therefore relate.
I know there is a secret that the water hid. I just don't know what is or I may have missed it because I don't think the piece revealed it. Interesting still.
I am curious and its honestly not sardonic or rhetorical, but its not like you can swim over water. So I think I really missed the punch on this piece.
Keep writing!
Love,
Ata

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