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4/1/2020 c1 48Woedin
How very intriguing this offering was, I perceived a very deep allegory running through the lines of your work here. And I'm sorry if any words snuffed out the passion of your protagonist. It happens truly, but is always, even if inevitable, oh so regretful. Your poem spoke to me, well done.
2/14/2020 c1 64atalantea
I read this piece at least four times trying to understand who the wind is and what it his/her relationship with the personna.
From what I gather, it seems the Wind who heard the personna's secret blew out what is left of the fire/desire she felt. Interesting! Me likey. I like the flow of the latter part of this piece too. Keep writing!
Love,
Ata

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