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6/15 c1 21LilyWoodlin
So fluffy and cute! (ノヮ)ノ*:・゚ Once school is over I'm going to read more of your writing.
2/22 c1 64atalantea
It has been a while since I've read a good and proper formalist poem with fixed rhyme and rhythm! I love the cadence of this piece.
The imagery was also very vivid and consistent. The angel, the white feathers etc belonged to the same theme which made the whole piece cohesive.
And just to give in to the romantic imagery, forehead kisses are awesome!
The ending was also a favorite! Keep em coming!
Love,
Ata
2/21 c1 43R.C. Wulfe
I am thoroughly enchanted with your writing. There is such strong imagery presented here that it incites genuine emotion - it flows like the soft inward swaying of the tide over the beach, water and sand, words and rhythm blending.

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