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3/30 c1 10The DarkCat
This was very saddening, I feel kind of bad for the woman, being reduced to such a horrifying state. As always beautiful, vivid writing style. "Such an angelic and perfect ballad, / From a being of twisted flesh?" i loved those lines. Thank you.
2/29 c1 45CitrusChickadee
A kind of sad, but really vivid and lovely piece! The imagery here, especially towards the end, is kind of creepy, but in a pretty way.
2/20 c1 38Woedin
~So inspirational my friend, I was compelled to join in~

Shadows now assail me, as I walk in this wood.
All sunshine has fled, how I wish that I could.
Something was lurking, concealed from my sight.
Shuffling, and stirring, provoking such fright.
I'd dug in my heels while standing this ground.
And I reined my breath, so I'd not make a sound.
Now fear had gripped me, 'twas all I could bear.
My eyes snap wide open, I could only now stare.
From a dark distance came a maiden's dread song.
Though twisted and broken she passed right along.
That horror before me, it could not be described.
For on my every attempt, all I told claimed I lied.

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