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3/30 c1 10The DarkCat
Oh, this was really mysterious, I really liked how the inn was painted in the beginning, already setting a chilling tone, even though I imagined it in warm colors and in contrast with the night. Quote: "ice veins dance along the floor around him." That line hit me, it was just so odd and creative. The ending was fabulous raising a lot of questions to me, like who did the protagonist meet? Who was the thin man? A wandering ghost? Uhhh, creepy. Anyway, an amazing poem.
2/29 c1 38Woedin
Truly chilling, and once again your poem fills every verse with the atmospherics that so skillfully compels your readers into each line of your offering. Until they to find themselves standing right there, face to face, with this frostbitten Ice King like figure you've berthed. I envy those abilities. ~Both scary and down right intriguing~

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