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5/11 c22 8M. Soames
I have read all of the poetry posted in this collection through the 22nd piece, "air." This brief review addresses the work in general. Short lines throughout, quick descent's a kind of running motif and consequence of the very structure you employ. Capitalization is mostly dispensed, as if too-big letters would impede your lyric velocity. But what is really falling? Current circumstances being what they are, this kind of re-examination of the world, to "make it new," however mundane, has at least paid distraction's rent for another half hour. Not bad.
4/3 c11 3TheClosetWriter16
Wow love your poetry!
3/29 c2 18Kitsune95
Those last two lines I absolutely adore. There is just something utterly romantic about a moonlit night. And this poem has a bit of sadness, a longing. I enjoyed it :)

Thank you for sharing
3/27 c1 Kitsune95
This is interesting. Clarity on equal plane as ghosts. It's neat putting the two together. Something by definition is certain while the other is nearly always in question. It's thought-provoking.

Thank you for sharing :)

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