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3/19/2020 c1 LDF
[Even though I had thought I had long since moved on from that time of my life, it would never go away. Not fully. And where I lived, people were as judgmental as they came. That day was pure hell; every single person I served that day noticed the pattern of my cuts.]

We never get to see the followup to the person who asked what happened. I felt that it showed genuine concern for her welfare, which isn't what the story is trying to tell with everyone supposedly judging why she cuts.
3/6/2020 c1 115CitrusChickadee
Sad, but you capture the narrator's feelings of frustration yet wishing they could move on really well here.

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