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5/24 c1 49Makeshift.Wings89
Beautiful. I really love you works!
3/23 c1 64atalantea
The persona is so earnest in this piece. I especially loved this line: "Whose silken petals, my soul enclose." Very pretty images. The rose imagery and metaphor was continuous throughout and that was beautiful. Often, people use the metaphor once and then leave it, but you wove it throughout the piece and that was so engaging.

Something I'm working on and I'd like to share, is in engaging more than one sense when writing, a pop song line said "Lips that felt just like the inside of a rose," and instantly, you felt the rose on your lips and not just saw it in your mind. I'm hoping I'm saying it right.

Keep writing! I mean it.

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