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4/9/2020 c1 26Zukafu Chiriamoto
This was a really sobering read and a little on the bittersweet side too - especially that last line.

I'm surprised how moving this piece can be in less than a thousand words. But you managed it with a good percentage of that to spare.

Thanks for sharing.
~ Zukafu
4/4/2020 c1 Guest
Hm... I'd like to see where this goes if you have plans for any other chapters!
4/3/2020 c1 9Michal Claire
It is a very short story, but doesn't feel that short, and extremely familiar as well.

(I think there might be a spelling error in the first line, "lie" on her bed" might supposed to be laid.)

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