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6/1 c1 64atalantea
I find it quite fascinating how this poem describes the pain of betrayal but still manages to be hopeful. That is no easy feat! I also like it that the piece expounds on the title... that faith and hope for true love will have to be formed through the hammer. It will hurt and it would take a beating but it would make one stronger.

I think you forgot to add the apostrophe for the word soul's in the latter part of the poem. Other than that, keep writing!
5/24 c1 49Makeshift.Wings89
Woedin, this poem says so much with so few words. I am blown away with how positive your take in heartbreak is even through the intense understanding of the deep pain it has brought you. I hope one day you will find your one true love, after enough time has passed, for it to remain hopeful and your dreams realized. Awaiting more of your poems from your journey to see how it's going.

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