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8/5/2021 c1 5TamariMizu
Hi D.M. Robb,

This story sounds like it was written about someone you knew at school. You perfectly captured the anxieties and pressures of grade school. It took my right back to the days where I once sat in Christine's uncomfortable desk/chair, atop wood floors with bubbling shellac, brick walls, and steam radiators. I totally relate to the gnawing fear of wanting to hide my report card from my parents especially as I always got terrible grades in foreign languages.

Well done, and a little bit too relatable for me (Take it as a compliment).


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