Just In
Community
Forum
V
More
for Cruising Into Danger

6/3 c1 12JDFly
I usually skip prologues but I read this one. Wish I hadn't because I really hate dream scenes. Your characters met neat, but I can't believe she would reveal all this info to a stranger no matter how handsome and trustworthy he appears to be. This isn't a negative review. Ha! It sure seems like one, doesn't it? However, it would have taken two or three chapters to bring us up to date on her life prior to coming to DC and you did it all and more in the first chapter.

Desktop Mode . Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service