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6/6 c1 239Synthey
This is quite an interesting take on a subject that's hardly talked about, I like the logical buildup to the conclusions;
6/5 c1 6Aloha opposite is Aloha
Why did you ahhh I am sorry Just processing the fact I thought it was going to turn around at the end but it didn't. Why do you do this? sigh. Not to say it wasn't good writing at all that was just my internal reaction it is better if thought as some one saying it.

Also fun note on grammar incase you care...(I am not trying to be a stick in the mud)
Because it's always followed by a "but".
Because it's always followed by a "but." or Because it is always followed by a "but,"
Why a point this out the intentional-Always.-after wards seems less on purpose because of the unintended one before
:) have a great day

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