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8/9 c1 5SirMycroft
Even in the shortest poem there lies untold depths of meaning and emotion. Good Job.
7/2 c1 40Woedin
~An offering that's both
succinct and cogent, and
I enjoy reading your works~

Truly, right under our feet,
a dormant evil does sleep,
it's as hungry as a famished young lion.
Tread lightly I say,
and let it sleep life away,
for when aroused we gazelles begin diein'.
7/1 c1 16Bob Story Builder
Quite appropriate for current times. Last line explodes (as if from a box) and makes this myth real. Lot to unpack here I think.
6/11 c1 21MirrorOnes
Love this haiku! It's really simple but elegantly paints the story of Pandora's box and it's illusion to modern times (especially now).


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