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6/23 c1 16Bob Story Builder
Love it. The first sentence brought me right back onto the boat I sail with my grandfather whenever I visit him. Vivid and evocative! How you use the senses and emotion immerses me. I get a sense of gratitude and oddly joy reading it. Bringing up so many emotions. Wonderful short piece.
6/21 c1 6DixieTanner19
True, patience is an important skill! The dialogue, as little as it is, really sounds natural for a young man to say. It also shows his younger self's impatience, which also fits with that theme. There may be more theme at work besides the importance of patience. I believe that the importance of family is another major theme here.

This is the first drabble I have read, and I liked it!

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