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4/20 c3 7Yuuenchi
I can tell where the agency of the story is going to be, all the positive agents seem to be female. This is not a complaint, btw. Admittedly, I could wish the chapters were a little longer -like they are on RoyalRoad, but then again, RR caters to a different type of storytelling. So please, don't stop what you're doing!
4/20 c2 Yuuenchi
A nice second chapter. Introducing the aunt, and the various social backgrounds. Can't wait for more.
4/20 c1 Yuuenchi
How did I not actually leave a review/comment on this before? I would swear that I did. So, let me make up for it now.

I love the atmosphere in this story, the feel of Edwardian era life (or maybe Victorian). I like the independence of Hermione.
9/7/2020 c1 25ariel25
I like the descriptions of the scenery. The juxtaposition of her memory of the place as a warm childhood summer haunt against the cold, harsh place as it is at present sets up an interesting tension that doesn't bode well for Hermione's stay.

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